Text:
Whoever heard Reb Shalom singing felt his heart grow
happier.
Most importantly, Reb Shalom knew how to lead the town. He
made sure that the widows and orphans were taken care of, that the poor were
fed, and that the laws of the Torah were kept. The town of Keppel respected and
loved their rabbi.
Rebbetzin Malka was his wife. And what a rebbetzin! Her
hands didn’t just work-they danced through the day while sweeping, washing or
serving bowls of soup to her three daughters. She was known all through the
town for making the most mouth-watering food and for her special way of helping
the sick.
Most importantly, she knew how to look at people with a
kind, loving eye and see what they really needed. The town loved their
rebbetzin.
Running
Record Form – EDLI635
Student’s Name:
Richard Smith (pseudo name) Grade: 6th
(ESL student) Date:11/6/2013
Title:”The
Marvelous Mix-Up” by Ruchama King Feuerman
Difficulty
Level of Text: for grades 2-4
Author:
Ruchamaa King Feurman
Running
Words: 124 Accuracy Rate: 94% Self Correction Rate: 1:5
Error Rate: 1:18
Comprehension: This student was able to retell what he read in his own words. He was able
to identify the characters with a little bit of detail and their relationships
with each other. He was also aware of the setting where the story took place.
Since there are not a lot of details listed in the passage, his description is
not very detailed. The student was able to recall in the correct order what he
read. In the passage there was not a problem and a solution to identify. When
retelling the student does use vocabulary from the text. Over all the student
was able to retell the story in a complete fashion.
Miscue Analysis:
It is important to note that this student is an English
Language learner. When he came across an unknown word he did tried his best to
pronounce the word. Based on his pronunciation however, it was clear that he
did not know what the real word meant. Therefore, when he said words that did
not make sense it was because of his lack of familiarity with the language.
This student did not appeal for help since he is confident in his reading
abilities. With his great determination he would sound out the words sometimes
repeating them. He did not use his own special cues to figure out the unknown
words presumably because English is not his first language.
Since this student was an ESL learner, this leads me to
believe that most of his mistakes were visual. I am not sure if he was familiar
enough with the language for him to make a mistake based on the meaning of the
words. This student was able to catch most of the word, pronouncing it closely
to how it was meant to be said. This leads me to believe that those mistakes
were structural since the basic skeleton of the body was there with the proper
prefixes and suffixes, but the word itself was gone. Although grammatically
speaking he got the word, he made a mistake because he was unaware of the
meaning.
Lesson Plan:
Since the student’s mistakes were based on his lack of
familiarity with the language, this lesson’s goal is to teach him the words
that he fumbled with. The first step of the lesson is to ask the student to
reread the passage and identify the words that are difficult to understand.
When the student forms his list, the student will be asked to look up these
words in a dictionary and copy down their definitions. The teacher will review
these words and their definition with the student and come up with sentences
that use these words. These sentences will be a part of the weekly vocabulary
test that the student is responsible for.
Word List: happier, importantly, widows, orphans, respected,
bowls, daughters
Reflection:
After learning about how to conduct
a running record, I feel much more equipped to assess my students’ progress. In
my experience as a teacher, the most professional and effective way to convey
information about students is through concrete test results. These figures are
indicative of the student’s skills which are integral for teachers to know in
order to proceed. As a teacher it is important to have a feel for where each
child is holding academically. This “feeling” however is not enough to ensure
that each student is progressing. Teachers need to base their lessons on solid
data that can help guide them to further the student’s learning.
While working with an English
learner, it was interesting to note his mistakes. This student hardly made
mistakes on words that he knew. I would assume this would also be the case with
students who are not English learners. Students tend to be familiar with words
that they commonly use and therefore have not trouble reading them. With words
that are a bit challenging students sometimes have to put in more effort to
decode them. I wonder if teachers find this more with ESL students than with
other students. Presumably ESL students will not know as many words as the
other students in the class and will therefore have a harder time reading without
mistakes. I am sure that this reality effects ESL test scores and overall
school performance level. It is important for teachers to keep their students’
backgrounds and challenges on the front burner so that these struggles can be
properly addressed.
Overall this student was very
enthusiastic about reading and about the overall story. He has been attending
English classes for the past three years and has progressed immensely over that
time. He was very proud to have reached the point of being able to read short
chapter books. I feel that his excitement for reading was the key behind this
student’s success. It is important for teachers to develop positive feelings
towards reading and writing in all of their students in order to produce the
best results. For this student especially his positivity was the key ingredient
behind his achievements.
Retelling Form
Student’s Name: Richard Smith
Date: 11/6/2013
Book Title: The Marvelous Mix-up
Score: 18, skilled
Date: 11/6/2013
Book Title: The Marvelous Mix-up
Score: 18, skilled
Sequence: 3
Setting: 3
Characters: 3
Problem: 3
Resolution: 3
Level of Prompting: 3
Total: 18, skilled
Notes: It is important to keep in mind that this reading sample was a page at the beginning of a short chapter book. Based on what was read before and the passage itself, this student scored the highest possible. However, this student did not read the whole book yet and therefore we did not discuss the main problem in the whole story.
Setting: 3
Characters: 3
Problem: 3
Resolution: 3
Level of Prompting: 3
Total: 18, skilled
Notes: It is important to keep in mind that this reading sample was a page at the beginning of a short chapter book. Based on what was read before and the passage itself, this student scored the highest possible. However, this student did not read the whole book yet and therefore we did not discuss the main problem in the whole story.
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